среда, 21 января 2015 г.

 In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.


             There are several reasons why job while you are still student is a good idea. Job is a very important part of our live. It is discipline us. It gives us new friends or just polish our skills.  Job is a good opportunity for teenagers in understanding the sphere where they want to work in the future. 
             First of all, job is a good idea because students understand how difficult to earn money. It show theme that money are not growing on the tree. One of my friend, named Katya,  always asks for money from parents and waste it very fast when parents said to spend it not such big amount Katya didn't hear anything. One day her parents stop giving money to her and she starts working. In several weeks she tired as much as never before. Since then she had a part-time job and spend money that earn by herself.
              The second reason is that then teenagers are working they stand more independent.
When students works they learn how to make decisions by themselves. At work teenagers separated with their parents so adults can't help them. 
              The last reason includes in working, at places where a lot of people around, for example, at cafe, so there they learn how to be flexible with  clients. How to find compromises . Imagine, for example,  if  waiter  drops something on you, what  would happened ?  You try to find compromise, right? 


     So, I think that it's a good idea working while you teenager it is also the  first step in carrier. If you have an experience in any work you have a very big plus in your next work because it is shows to employers that you really want and can work. I hope it would more opportunities for teenagers in our country, so they could spend more time for development themselves

1 комментарий:

  1. Hi Dariia,

    You missed a class on essay writing. Hope everything is OK and you keep track with your studying.

    As for this paragraph, there are some ideas which can be followed but need further exploration and deeper development.

    Yours,
    Marina.

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